How
to Tidy Your Messy Room?
Cleaning
your messy room is not easy, but it will be easier if you follow these steps. You
can listen to the radio or songs that you enjoy singing or dancing along with
during cleaning your room. First of all you need to prepare the tools that you
need to clean the room like broom, duster, mop or vacuum cleaner. The second
step is taking everything that’s on the
floor and on the table away. Start with the bigger things, like chairs,
lamp, telephone, and then move into smaller things, like books, socks, shoes
and dirty clothes, and then put them in appropriate place. For example put your books on your book shelf or put
the dirty clothes in the washing machine or empty basket. Third, take the rubbish around your room and then put the rubbish in the rubbish
bin. It will make your room look tidier. Fourth, sweep the floor and
then mop or vacuum the floor. Don’t forget to clean the dust of you furniture also. The
last step is, spray some air freshener or aroma therapy in the room, a fragrant
room is makes us more comfortable.
very good osin.. it's a good tips for me. :D
ReplyDeletemaybe if you add some pictures, it will be more interesting. :)
and also, in your last sentence, "a fragrant room is makes u more comfortable". I think that's something wrong with it. Maybe you can check the correct grammar.. hehehe
thankyou osin.. :D
Dear Osin,
ReplyDeleteI already read your paragraph and it’s very good. Your paragraph’s contain of topic sentence and also steps in time order. You paragraph is already good in capital letters, spelling, period at the end of the sentences, and quiet good in determining to put a comma. But, I think you miss one comma after word “For example” in the sixth sentence. Also you have to put a comma in your second sentence. Because, it’s too long for the readers. The readers have to hold a breath for a long time and feel a little bit exhausted after that. Your sentence structure is good also. It’s seems you will be a good writer soon, Osin.