My Best Friend
Do
you have a best friend? Do you always spend your time with your best friend? How
do you feel when you spend your time with your best friend? Best friend is
someone who always stays beside us whenever we need, not only when we are
happy, but also when we are sad and have a lot of problems. I believe that
everyone has best friends, someone who won’t be hasitate to lend his or her
shoulder to cry on. Taharyanti is one of my best friends. I acquainted with her
when I entered English Education Department on the first day. With her
appearance, her personality, and the way she cares at me, she becomes one of my
best friends.
Yanti
is one of good looking girls in our department. As a girl, she has a nice
appearance. She is in average of height, about 158 cm. she has beautiful hair,
when we in second semester her hair was long, but when in the first day of
fourth semester she had her hair cut. Although she cut her hair, she still
looks beautiful. She has a small and pointed nose. Her dark eyes and her
proportional body shape enhance her appearance. With her alluring appearance,
no wonder many students, especially the boys, admire her.
Not
only, has a catchy appearance, she also has good personality. Yanti is very
friendly. She is easy to make conversation with strangers. No wonder, she has
many friends in our department and other departments. She can make other people
feel comfortable and safe beside her. If I am with her, I will always feel
comfortable to do everything from chatting, hanging out, and gossiping. Besides,
she is also an organize and responsible girl. That’s why she can manage her
schedule and finish her assignment on time.
Yanti
can understand me very well. For me, Yanti is the type of prudential friends. As
the slogan of prudential “always listening, always understanding”, she is a
person who will help me up when I am down. And if she can’t help me up, she
just listens to my problem and stories. Some times she is also my reminder. When
I make mistakes, she will remind me to do a good things again she always takes
care of me.
Yanti
is one of my best friends and she will always be my best friend. We will always
spend our time together. With every single things about her, star from her
catchy appearance, her personality, and the way she cares of me, she will be my
best friend forever.
Wow. You are so lucky to have an amazing friend like her, right?
ReplyDeleteYap. I agree with you. Yanti is beautiful, smart, and active. :)
I really love your writing as well. You explain everything about your best friend clearly.
However, I think you have to pay attention on the mechanic.
For example, the first sentence in the third paragraph. You wrote, "Not only, has a catchy appearance, she also has good personality."
I think, it should be "Not only has a catchy appearance, she also has good personality."
Overall, you have done a good job. Keep writing. :)